100WC-week 12- Pham Ngoc Linh, 6A1, HNTL

Arthur’s dream
Arthur is a boy who lives in Africa. He is English but his family was moving house a long time ago. Arthur always dreams about one place which has a lot of snow. He thinks about it,… he wants to see white snows. One day, his aunt’s told him to come to New York. When he came to New York, he was very surprised. “I can see the snow!” His dream came true. Hurried! Let’s eat the sandwichs together”. He was so energetic like he was charged the battery. But,… he was realised: the happiest dream is family.

by Pham Ngoc Linh, 6A1, Hanoi Thanglong, Hanoi, Vietnam­

One thought on “100WC-week 12- Pham Ngoc Linh, 6A1, HNTL”

  1. Hey Linh!
    I hope you are having a good day. I love your writing it has good sentence stems. No two sentences start with the same word. Oh but your story details are really good from what I see. An I can also see sandwich, Battery, Energetic, White and hurried. And do not put so many periods in your writing. This writing made me feel interested in your writing.
    From Liam in Illinois.

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