There is a forest ruled by a tiger. The tiger wants to throw a party. There is a tree wants to go to the party. It tells the trees to go with it. “Are you crazy?” other trees speak.” I wish I have feet” it cries. Then, a fairy appears!” I’ll give you a pair of foot” she said. “But you must return before 10 p.m. or the feet will stick to your body” then she disappears. The tree plays eat,… It’s almost 10 p.m! It runs but the time is faster. The feet stick on its body until now.
by Pham Ngoc Linh, 6A1, Hanoi Thanglong, Hanoi, Vietnam.
Great story! I love that wishes are being granted. I have a few wishes myself. Also, I like the personification of the trees, giving the trees human qualities.
I liked your story. Next time you could add paragraphs.
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