Week#19-100 word challenge- Ngo Tho Quang

An unlucky flight

It was a sunny day when Jack decided to fly his brand new helicopter that his father bought him for his birthday. He ran to the back of his yard and put his helicopter pad that he made himself out of LEGO. He put the helicopter carefully on the pad and push the lever to start it up and few minutes later, the helicopter was in the sky. Suddenly, Jack lost signal and his helicopter flew over the roof of his house and guess what, it came down the drainpipe. Jack thought fast and got an axe and broke the pipe. Even though his dad growl at him, he was still very happy because he had saved the helicopter.

One thought on “Week#19-100 word challenge- Ngo Tho Quang”

  1. Hi Quang,

    A very good piece of writing! Well done! I loved the way that you used the sentences to build a sense of excitement with the new toy. Has this ever happened to you? Did your dad growl at you? I am sure that I would growl at one of my children if they broke the drainpipe with an axe!

    Keep up the good work,
    Yanalie (Team 100)

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