A scary night
It was a misty night, a naughty kid named John was walking through a graveyard when he saw a crimson colored grave. He stood next to it and said:
“Hello, who are you?”
After he asked that, the grave started shaking frantically and a hand pulled John’s left foot down.
“Help!”
He shouted but it was too late, he has already been pulled down to hell.
Wow, that is a really cool story. You did lines (-) instead of speech marks (“”) so maybe you could improve on that.
Nice story. I liked how you added action. Next time you could add more juicy words.
Also, check out my version of this post at: http://callum2017.global2.vic.edu.au/2018/04/30/100-word-challenge-shouted-crimson-misty-frantically-grave/
loved how the put prompt words in bold
I like the end of the story how you said that it was to late that he went to hell.
I like the end of the story how you said that it was to late that he went to hell.