WC 100-week 9, Nguyen Hoang Vo 7A1, HNTL

In my opinion , the ghosts in the picture are very dangerous . We can not see them , so they can kill us anytime if we are not attention. I think they are reason of a lots of case which the detective can not find the culprit. They live in hell, it is a dark and scary place with lots of skeletons, spiders, monsters…They are walking down the street to find the bad victim. So we have to extermination them so the world will be peace.

By Nguyen Hoang Vo 7A1, Hanoi Thanglong School, Hanoi, Vietnam

One thought on “WC 100-week 9, Nguyen Hoang Vo 7A1, HNTL”

  1. Hi there Nguyen Hohang Vo! Thank you for taking the time to post on the 100 Word Challenge. Your story was so interesting because it wasn’t a story, but an opinion, which is quite unusual but refreshing to read. Your opening sentence is very powerful and your author voice was very strong and well defined. I do like the idea of all the unsolved crime being due to ghosts. Well done and keep on writing.
    Mrs. T. Wiltshire, UK (100 Word Challenge Team)

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