WC 100-week 9, Tran Minh Ngoc 5A1, HNTL

One evening, I went shopping with my friend, Huong, in the city center. Suddenly, we heard people whispering, whispering,… and we saw some strange people. I thought they were ghosts. We all scared and thought about what happened if they saw us. But there were no happened because when the ghosts came near us, they didn’t do anything, just smiled. The ghosts were the soul of whom were dead. And maybe they lived in hell, underground, in where is very dark and bored. So, they wanted to show out to go shopping, met and played with people on the ground. So, while they were shopping they looked so happy. They were real friendly ghosts! When they went away, Huong said to me that she wanted to meet other ghosts liked them again. And me, too!

By Tran Minh Ngoc 5A1, Hanoi Thanglong School, Hanoi, Vietnam

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  1. Hi Tran Minh Ngoc
    Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us. I like how your ghosts are such friendly ones. I also thought it was interesting that you described hell as a place that was very boring. It is so much nicer to have exciting things to do and see. A dark and boring place would be awful – especially if it was for a very long time. I was wondering if the ghosts had money to go shopping and if so, where did they keep their money? Was it ghost money?
    I can picture shopkeepers running away or throwing things at the ghosts to make them go away.
    Keep up the great writing.
    Ms McKenzie (Team 100WC Christchurch, New Zealand)

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